Comments : Why so gloom? (Villanelle)

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Stunning piece Chels , I love how your
    Not afraid of a challenge , this form is a nightmare
    You really put alot into this

    This just shows how much of an amazing writer
    You have become

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is very comforting chels, it could really be describing any relationship but I imagine it as a mother and her child. Trying to comfort her through every stage of growing up and all the difficulties she faces.

    Very warm poem and again you done well to fit this powerful emotion into a form. Very touching. xx