Comments : In wonderland, as Me

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    I love this 'Alice in wonderland' theme here in your poem. Very original Lillie! Great thought!

    A nice ending line to finish on :
    'No wings, no light, the meaning to my life, I still have not found'
    Simply brilliant!

  • 11 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    I love this 'Alice in wonderland' theme here in your poem. Very original Lillie! Great thought!

    A nice ending line to finish on :
    'No wings, no light, the meaning to my life, I still have not found'
    Simply brilliant!