Very beautiful and pulls the heart to it's limit just by reading this poem it makes me wonder indeed why do you stay? love isn't what i see in this poem it's what you want love and this poem makes me think of the time i too had this thoughts in my mind and to all honesty i find it a work of art the poem tells and visualizes the pain of the author and the tough choices she has to make VERY beautiful love 5/5

Queen Ashlin

I loved it i almost cried very touching

I just wanted ot say thanks for commenting on my poetry i really appreciate it!!! im having a hard time getting anyone to notice me so thanks so much!!! this is very beautiful btw