another great poem... I dunno why it got such low votes.... the "ones bandit" doesn't usually strike so soon... LOL....

Personally, I feel like a couple of your lines got split at an awkward place...

one of them was "Let me drift above on" I think the "on" should be downon the next line to flow more smoothly... the other one that stuck out to me was an "a" a few lines above that, but I can't remember exactly what it said.

Anyway, it was an AWESOME poem

Ann Marie-thanks for the advise- I edited it and your right it does flow better. I appreciate your comments, your one of my favorites on this site!!