So beautiful and wonderfully penned

Beautiful poem. You paint a very vivid picture of paradise that anyone would love to visit. Nice work!

Oooh, I loved this, really beautiful words, such a nice tone to it as well xxx

This was really creative and I liked your choice of acrostic.

You painted a clear scene in my head while I read this but there is one line that jumped out most to me :

Adrenaline is a divine intervention

- I adore this line and would perhaps like to see you make this line into a poem itself and explain this deeper? Very interesting line indeed!

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