Comments : Unheard

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    I'm drowning
    In a pool of nails
    And my body breaks
    As I am so frail

    ^That stood out to me the most. That part actually could be a poem entirely its own. This is worded exactly how you feel. These are the things that run through your mind and it's evident to me, because you've just worded what thousands of people struggling like this can not. Always brilliant, Hanny.<3

  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Sad, angry in some ways. You always have a way of making your emotions of sadness interesting, not sure if thats the right wortd, interesting, but it kept me reading, so the word applies. Very nice Hannah.

  • 11 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Thank you Linda. I love you girl. And I see your writing the same as you see mine <3