Comments : Too close?

  • 9 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Wow. This poem is extremely good. :). I loved how you described a friendship and how no matter how close we are with a person and can speak our mind around them we should always consider their feelings and our speech should be seasoned with salt no matter who it is. Very good rhyming and flow in this poem. I loved it! :)

  • 9 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Another great poem Tainted Melody!
    I am fast becoming a big fan of your writing!
    So much wisdom is painted into your words.
    A good poem TM!