Comments : Dearly Beloved

  • 11 years ago

    by Masked metaphor

    Such a deep powerful poem. Your words flow so well, it is easy to read... Each line displays all the emotions from your heart spreading across the screen. I love how toward the beginning you were saying goodbye and then as you read on there is a clear realisation that you discovered it's not goodbye, that love runs deeper than death and although he is gone his memory continue to linger in your heart.
    I found that way you finished the poem with the words of your promise so deep, strong and powerful.
    This poem was so touching thanks for sharing!

    5.5 from me