Comments : Appropriate husband for the daughter [Tanka]

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    If it works you win a son
    ^ I think the son is her husband, fails means you lost the both. so both are not good looking in their life.
    khalid your poems are always deep even it may be a short poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I agree on the part about winning a son, but not entirely on losing a daughter. As a daughter is the daughter and even if the marriage doesn't work, I don't see how is the parent to blame?

    oh, Sir, is this in relation to arrange marriages?

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    I really have no words for your excellence in words. The only thing I can say is that your poems are a message and a wise one!
    Wonderful
    Keep writing:)