Nice work on the club contest, Kips.

It seems your "fallen angel" will be missing out on the biggest catch in her life time!

The one remark I have about this poem is that I didn't much care for the change of tune in the last two stanzas, they seemed to be seperated from the first five due to the tone used.

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

Every wheat ferments for good brew. Within every scar, healing dwells.

Every wheat ferments for good brew. Within every scar, healing dwells. Indeed beautifully worded!