Thats a fantastic poem, very descriptive with a few chosen words. ~bustle = great use and goes very well for the tone of the poem. " with little effort" shows just how strong it is. I find it very interesting when I learn new things from a poem so you added a little bit in here, thanks!

Great job.

I really like how you linked the noise of a freight train with a tornado... I didn't see that coming at all. And also how you describe it pillaging through these small farming communities. Good write Rusheena! (: