Beautiful, the new style was refreshing to read. Good word choice 5/5

mandy :)

Amazing as always Robert!
Nominated:)

I liked the use of words here and i absolutely loved the first stanza. It struck me as someone who was dumbfounded upon the sight of a person who he/she liked. I was just stuck at the first stanza and read it over and over again like my favorite record.
The ending came to me by surprise, i honestly wasn't expecting that. Overall, a job well done though the capitalization of each word did not appeal to me but that's not important. Great job!

Wow! This is a lovely read, has a great flow, and wonderfully written

Wow! This is a lovely read, has a great flow, and wonderfully written

I love all your words here Robert, very clever use of them all.
This is good!! In praise of women!

Let not the Start, overwhelm you. Not until pain, is any real. Indeed beautifully disclosed.

Nice work, mister R.G.Love:)

I like that you have written it with less commas, it makes for easier reading.

This was enthusiastic as you always are about women and it brought a smile to my face, as your work always does!

Well done on the format,

5/5 Ingrid