Comments : Darkness withen

  • 11 years ago

    by Texas Battle

    Dark indeed

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Think there is a certain darkness within every one of us- things we don't show to others. We just find a way to deal with them.

    There are a few punctuation errors and mis-spellings but all in all this is a strong piece.

    Welcome to the spotlight kid. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Walter F Alvarado

    Very nice piece. I identified with it at a younger stage of my life

  • 10 years ago

    by Walter F Alvarado

    Very nice piece. I identified with it at a younger stage of my life

  • 10 years ago

    by Darclyfe

    Reminds of my mirror image of what I used to see inside myself. Times have changed And I don't see that guy anymore. But every once in awhile. I feel like someone different.

    • 10 years ago

      by Aubrey

      Ya....I can understand that....but ur a great Guy and writer ... just keep ur head up....and thanks