Comments : Odds

  • 6 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    The reasons why
    is always in doubt.
    In our heads
    the battle is fought.
    Causing so much noise
    and getting too loud.

    - change "is" in the second line to "are"

    Excellent poem, the repetition made this really work and the flow was short and fast like a song. I got a little rhythm going while reading this.

    Very powerful words Thomas.