Okay, Saffie.

I'm gonna be real honest with you....

I understand exactly what you're saying here...trust me, I do.

The second stanza kind of caught me and made me stumble, it's the ending of that stanza. Maybe a word rearrange would work there, just the flow was a bit stop and go...

Not to say I didn't think this was good, you're emotions here were really powerful,
I felt them inside, and girl, you're strong, sometimes it's the hard things that we need to do because some people don't get you, some people can be right d***s and be so judgemental that they don't see the beauty in you.

Keep going babes x

Thanks Tara, I know this wasn't my best work but I knew that, this was just a spit and post poem that needed out for my own release. xxxx

I get that, and I think it's actually very well written.

Everything you write is your best work, it's all your emotion and what needs to written should be.

x