Hi

I liked reading this. I have to say I've written a poem quite like this but it's not as dark. I think the idea's neat. I can't say I can wholly connect with this write due to the topic of being on the heavier side but I think everyone has insecurities. Everyone has their flaws. There are voices in our heads, always reminding us about all these imperfections. Sometimes it is good to just ingore them but listening to them also brings positive results. I always think that there is a good side and a bad side to everything. Just listen to the good and ignore the bad ones. These "monsters" do bring down our self-esteem, our confidence etc. but they also help us change for the better.

Brilliantly worded rhymed poem, nobodies worthless and everyone is beautiful, so don't worry about the stupid monsters ! 5/5 for this poem from me !