Comments : Confusion...

  • 9 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Love the format of this poem.
    The usage of wording was effective and deep.
    I like the battle inside of you and how you explained it; you did a good job here.
    You may want to go back and fix "with" for this stanza below..

    Unable to think, sleep or eat just leaves me wih this confusion that I can not beat

    As you can see it's wih instead of with. Anyways keep up the good work.
    5/5