Comments : S. B. number one

  • 11 years ago

    by Ravindra Kumar

    Beautiful piece of work. Avidity of love is exposed in rhetorical manner. Presentation of the thoughts are exemplified. Lovable.

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Wanting to say the right thing
    But I know I'll never be able to put down everything
    ^^ Sometimes we can't say everything what we are thinking in our mind.
    Lovely...

  • 10 years ago

    by dalllllal

    This brought tears to my eyes I hope this person always stays in your life
    "You warn my heart
    And for a second
    I forget parts are still healing"
    My favorite part