Comments : O my last breath!

  • 12 years ago

    by xXxMidnight SoulxXx

    Awh this is such a cute poem you could've put more imagery and made it longer but hey that's just me lol and hmmmm i love the emotions i really do 5/5

    Queen Of Me

    • 12 years ago

      by Sourabh Mishra

      Thanks for your suggestion. I would surely keep that in mind while writing the next poem..

      Regards,
      Sourabh