Beautiful! You reli hit the spot with every word. Gud job

I wanted to cry!!! seriously i've been both sides of this poem lol the girl and the guy and i've still amazed that i haven't read your poetry more often! :) 5/5

The Ex-Queen Of The Revived Ones

This is really great. I love the title name. I like how you show that he tortures you from the core.
good to know when you should stay away from someone to keep yourself from continuing to get hurt. I like your descriptiveness. Very well written. 5/5