I'm intrigued with your words and this poem...I really do like it but..although it's free verse I would love for you to change some of the sentences around a little..pm me if you are interested?

Not a great lover of poems that have God in them....I much prefer to be a hint of the unknown rather than just come right out and name the one in whichever religion is right for the individual but...that's just my preference I guess....did enjoy this one though...