Comments : Carpe Diem

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    This is good. The rhyming seemed forced at times, but this is good. Remember - that not all poetry has to have a rhyming basis.

    Lovely. :)

    • 11 years ago

      by Jon

      Thank you, I wasn't initially planning on there being a rhyme scheme but it developed into that in the beginning and I just wanted to keep consistency.