I don't know why this poem reached me, but it did. The thing is, I never, literally, will never voluntarily click on a love piece. Love poems just never interest me, and they all feel so repetitive. This was one of the few exceptions - along with one that Crystal wrote recently. This club apparently just has a gift for writing good love poetry. I really felt the weight of this one - I voted for it, and I'm guessing it was a part of that 3-way tie :)

Really, Meme, you made this quite beautiful. I love the little rhymes you snuck in there. It flowed, nothing felt like it was forced.

"A professor is how I
still picture you, for you
have introduced me to
something I never knew."

That was so sharp for me. I know exactly what that feeling feels like - and it's worded exactly correctly. Just, altogether, geesh. This really was an enjoyable poem.

I really liked this piece!

Meme...I do like the thoughts behind this poem and..I see it was written for a club challenge so...I''m not sure what restrictions where enforced but...you have a nice poem here but ...it's just not what I'm used to reading from you...the fluency is not the same as I'm used to reading but...this poem needs to be saved IMO..take your own style and work on it please....it's got a lot of potential just a little jerky right now...hope you understand my comment?

Its the praising or the feeling after the poet got someone very true love. its exact the time when someone feels the complete love. i respect the words you write here... good work. Meme