Comments : The Visit

  • 12 years ago

    by Hellon

    I'm intrigued..this seems to me like some sort of journey that you did not take together? A few minor grammatical errors that can be fixed up easily...I did like it...

    • 12 years ago

      by olalekan oladejo

      Thank you Hellon.

      You are right, its in memory of a late friend. She passed on months ago, but came visiting (in my dream) the night before I wrote the poem.

      Will take another look and remove the errors.

      Thank you.