Comments : Hiden between the cracks

  • 12 years ago

    by xXxMidnight SoulxXx

    First line it should be "is" instead of "are" and you should put "my" after "are"
    second line should be "flamming is my heart"
    fourth line should be "worry" but i love how it's nice and short and super sweet good job sweeite 5/5

    Queen Ashlin

  • 11 years ago

    by Jaleel

    Haha young love