Lemon,

I adore this write for many reasons... You have captured the act of death... and gave it a comforting feeling... to make the reader feel comfort within death is a beautiful thing... the word usage of hot chocolate and kittens is quite creative here, and the ending is that of hope to carry on, for its not time yet...

really adore this one!

I don't know if I'll ever be ready, but this was kind of comforting, I think the words you chose is what gives this feeling... and even Death is telling you, enjoy life, have fun, live, don't be in such a hurry to die, but just know that when it is your time, I will be there to make it easy and peaceful for you... love this write

Hi joss this is dark indeed it's about meeting the devil i loved the end how much emotion you put in that when you said not so young & naive and a little more ready to die they sent me on my way i think you mean hell and joss that is dark but well written you felt you are not wanted so the devil is your only choice and you are a beautiful person let me just say that okay inside & out i loved it my friend peace & love midnight sky