I like the idea of this piece! Parasols are timeless, I adore the look.

I like the rhyme scheme but I feel it's a little off at the beginning ... dresses and lashes don't rhyme, at least not to me? and the ending seems unfinished.

"They twirl like girls wearing new fit dresses,"

^ I think the use of 'fit' is awkward ...maybe another word... I find myself reading it like "They twirl like girls wearing new sassy dresses" lol...maybe iit's because it could flow with sashes. Just a suggestion. :)

Overall, I love the idea of parasols in spring, twirling, flaunting, grateful to be shown to the world instead of hoarded in an attic!

Lovely write! :)

Oh okay, I see it now... I'm glad you was able to finish it! It's beautiful! :)