So, I'm assuming this is a haunted house type vibe. You definitely used great imagery throughout the poem, describing the streets and people, along with the descriptions of the house.

Maybe this house isn't haunted, but it's definitely a house that is creepy, gives off bad vibes, maybe even something happened in that house on a personal level that is a bad memory.

Nice concept, and just a really well written piece!

"Where god may weep
while nightmares sleep
and none should enter
for none shall leave"

^This sounds like one of those old creepy rhymes, sort of Freddy Kruger type stuff! It was a nice touch for the ending!