Your vocabulary is fantastic... though rather too advanced for me xD. Great going with the rhyming (since you said you're not a big fan of writing rhyming poetry).

"and religion is the science of the
man with sin
charismatic but well spoken
though they speak from gin"- that part I thought was particularly wonderful. I love the way you worded it and the semi-metaphor of religion being a science.

I'm sorry, I must annoy you, but I'm a big fan of your poetry :)