These poems together make such beauty , in the two pieces you gave us some really awesome images but
You get like the boat itself then deep hidden meanings
In your word , well I did I saw a piece of ever lasting love , the ending on this piece just sums up the whole point of these poems I think you wrote this poem
With such ease. .... Amazing !

The first one, was a great write, and when I realised this was the sequel to that I was squealing with excitement :)

The follow on works well, this was just as smooth and captivating, the imagery and metaphors are absolutely marvellous.

The tone of a strong love, surviving distance, still being strong, really beautiful and how it can pull you in and keep you there...lovely

Fantastic penmanship once again, Meme xxx

Thanks guys :)

Meme-

You have captured the elegance of this piece, and added a sequel of greatness to a beautiful poem... She would have loved this addition... She also would have wanted this piece nominated, so I did... its breathtaking Meme <3

Lovelovelovelovelove;
completely and utterly in love.

I will leave better comments on BOTH of these soon! I promise.

Nominated! <3
added to my favorites, of course.

Judge Comment:

Meme has once again, penned a marvelous poem; A sequel to carry on the beautiful tail of a woman waiting for her love at sea.

The tone of old spirited love leaves me seeing a woman standing at the harbor, writing her lover and intentions of bringing him home.

The gut wrenching heartache of distance between two souls is evident in this piece... She penn's a beautiful ending of true love, waiting for her Admiral to come back to her arms.

The romance is truly felt from start to finish.. Beautiful, beautiful, piece!! Well Done!