This is truly a dark, eerie piece you have here, it made me cringe with the thought of being captured in the night! I interpret this as a predator waiting to capture a girl in a back alley, raping her and then taking her back to his place, his 'dungeon' and torturing her. :(

Truly a sad piece. It really fits in with the "SVU" title and theme of the show!

Nice... a good read.

Someone needs fired, and you need hired. Excuse me as I call NBC pretending to be the Executive Producer we all know and love and I fire Julie and hire you. :)

Very dark and eerie. So much talent, girl!

Big fan of SVU and your poems; This one doesn't disappoint!

I LOVE it sweetie i really do made me feel a litle scared 5/5

Thread by thread.
He's dragging me into his
dark, dank dungeon--
drenching me in death,

loving the D wording here, very very fitting for the poem and category of it.
I am glad you took this title, you rocked the poem and gave it a very creepy feel and dark tone.

Enjoyed this one, well done.

Avery dark piece, wonderfully put together.Good job on this piece.