I haven't read a poem like this with the rhyme for a while, it makes me miss writing them as it is how I used to write my poems.

I liked the cryptic idea of the poem with the questions kind of battling each other and leading onto other thoughts in a cycle.

it is like you are trapped and feel stuck in this life and like there is no way out that wil be a good way because perhaps you feel tricked at every turn? like you will fail.

it is always good to find older work and see what was on our minds.

The Abba already tells you the answer in one of their song, "The Winner Takes it All", whoever brings the smile out of the last round of a game is a winner.

The Abba already tells you the answer in one of their song, "The Winner Takes it All", whoever brings the smile out of the last round of a game is a winner.

Very nicely done here you never know who's gonna come out on top sometimes you just got to play the game loved it & loved the title to my friend 5\5 :) p&l

Awesome write. Loved the flow of it.
The hidden messages and ideas throughout it are well placed in there as well.
Loved the part about being unable to read their poker face but the metaphor of how you will not wave your white flag and give up the chase, really powerful piece right that.
Stuck with me, and was able to honestly relate to this poem in some ways due to my past.
Awesome write for when you were just 15.