Comments : An Expensive Advice [String Senryu]

  • 6 years ago

    by Meme

    Words of wisdom in here Sir!
    And I loved the form you used.

  • 6 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Oh yes...Oh yes Khalid.
    You just hit the nail on the head, hammered it to the wall.

    Like, this is powerful...very wise and true.

  • 6 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I agree with both these ladies, wisdom shines through this piece!

    The first stanza shows the circle of life... birds think they are on top because they eat the ants, but without knowing when they die, the ants eat their remains.

    The ones who pick on the weak will ultimately fall later in life, they always do. Bullies win for the moment, the bullied win the overall race of time.

    Nice poem!

  • 6 years ago

    by Mohan

    Time stronger than you
    ^^wow! what a powerful lines and I think your words stronger than you....

  • 6 years ago

    by Amreen

    True! Your poems make me ponder on the small things we ignore in our lives. There is so much to learn from this, about how every being is important and a purpose to fulfil on earth.

    Fabulous!!

    Keep writing:)