HAHA wow, I love it. I did wonder where the poem was going because I thought has he really wrote a poem about the Queen? Then the mention of the games and players I got the image of a Chess game, and you have went into greater depths of the game. I also like how you bring it to fate in the end for who is going to win the game.

This too, can be simply put into a game of chess, or it can be taken into daily situations and life itself.

brilliant idea.

I love the concept of this and the idea, and how it's a metaphor for everything in life...it works really well.

There are some issues with the grammar though, which would really help the flow, which is smooth when the grammar is correct.

I'm trap should be

"I'm trapped"

" This board never plays dumb
Our concepts capture the King"

"The Queen has all the moves" add the s on "move"

Otherwise, I really liked this.
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