There are some really deep images in here. The ending in particular of being buried in shame, it is so powerful and I think everyone at some point in their lives will relate to this and feel this amount of shame.

I like the layout of it and the mystery in the beginning of where you are going to take this poem.

I also think your title is very fitting and eye catching, it is something that is used often in speech but not so much in poetry.

Well done.