Comments : Why Did You Leave?

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Sweetie, they alwaus find away to get those walls down, especially if you are hyper. And not everyone leaves you. Theres no way you did anything wrong.

    On to the piece. Beautiful flow. Decent word choice. And love the voice because i can imagine you on the phone with me ranting on and on about this new person and how they also ran away. Haha this piece is so us. Well written, though i cannot say i am a fan of your style in thia one... it feels like its missing something.