Comments : Love Beat

  • 10 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    This is so sweet :) brought a smile to my face.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice and rhymic also

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice and rhymic also

  • 10 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice and rhymic also

  • 10 years ago

    by dindee

    Uyh...LUB DUB is the sound of the heart....

    LUB for the closure of atrioventricular valve...

    and DUB for semilunar valves....

    char!!!!

    • 10 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Grabe pati yun cnita... :( luv dub parang hindi naman ? kasi inirhyme ko po sya kaya ganun... like what i said sorry i wrote what i feel so i wrote it thanks for the comment :)

  • 10 years ago

    by dindee

    Eh TUG TUG??????its not..

    you put there..."correct me if im wrong... please thanks"

    with matching please...so i corrected you....
    you must edit your poem so i wont correct you....hahahaha...

    bleee...