This is a very good short little poem. Your words are very good. I loved the ending because its hard to break down anothers walls let alone climb them. 5/5

JamesTheShadow
thank you for the high rating. you can always tell when you made a great fortress, when no one can figure out how to get in.

Very nice piece. Your poems are very relatable, which I like very much. A good job done again!