I really like the last stanza I think many people can relate to it, myself included. Your words are very powerful and I enjoyed this piece. Wonderful write.

This truly is a wonderful write sad and powerful. It truly could be based on reality.

You start out so strong and your words speak of sadness . I love the last line of your first stanza because it is sad yet true. When emotions take over we truly are blind.

When we go through depression we don't remember our happiness. Darkness always taakes over the light. Your words are great here. I love this poem your wordsare great. As I have battled depression. 5