Hi..=)

"Not even with asomeone kind."
--may should be "a someone"..

"My heart hurt and I simply just whep"
--maybe "weep"

"Your a love I can't replace"
--i guess "you're"

"An it Wont take long."
--should be "and"

"You can in just one day."
--"You can,in just one day."(just a little comma)

"For you said you loved us more then this"
--should be "than"

--that's all i see for a tiny correction..---=)

"I hope Karma gets you and you remember us! "
--i love that line...

its sad that your story turned out that way...

sometimes...you can still fix a broken thing but expect that it wont be the same again as you wish it would be...

yeah...how much you'll try it...it is better to leave it that way..i dont know.....

karma will.....