I love the honest emotions within this piece, you defined love with a beautiful bright color.
Awesome piece Saff!! :)

Beautiful words Saffie

This truly is a beautiful write. It makes me think of of all my friends now and how lucky I am to have them and it shows you love them too.

True friends know how you are feeling and always lookinto your eyes and can see your world really. They know our true pain and uunderstand why we need to be silent. Our words our powerful when we use them right! There is always dark in each world and there is nothing we can do about that. When you said they colour your world I imagined a rainbow as it holds many different colours but each one unique just like friends. Or at night or the dark.... friends could be the stars in the sky. The past is hard to deal with knowing my own but the future or the present is always bright with friends the way you describe.

We embrace ehat we have in life and never want to let it go at all. I love the holding of hands because it is such a simple thing but magical in so many different ways. Wow the metaphor for the moon to the heartbeat is great indeed. Even one voice can calm anyone I totally agree there. When we feel loved our heart want to believe its real because that what the heart does. And its always great to feel loved back no matter what!

I truly love the message of this poem as in no matter what we do our true friends will always be there. The flow was great and its broken down great to help it rhyme more nicely. Well done 5