I don't even know how you come up with this stuff!! Its so great!

So much I can say about the first stanza! You are not amonster but I know in the poem you are! The vivid details you give always dance in my head and its scary! Which is a great thing! There is a small monster in all of us! And when it wants to break loose it really be frightning. Great set up as always!.

Second- The night time is so great to use here because a lot of peoples minds play tricks in the dark. It can bring out the worst in all of us no doubt! I love combo words of jezebel and night for many reasons which erm I wont say lol. You are a shadow inside and its wounding your very soul!

Third- I love the word Romping here to describe the monster inside. And I love how you used the sky to try and help heal you. The stars and night have a way of doing the indeed!

Ending- I love the misuse of twinkle twinkle little star its by far my favorite stanza. This poem truly blew me away. I love how the drowns you and finally ends your screams. Unbelievable! I see no flaws here at all. 5