I loveeee this poem. You went a bit more dirty then usual but I love it. I totally love the build up of yhe two lovers. The smiles are great and in my head you could tell they love each other. The imagery is fantastic. I loved every detail. The kissing was amazing though. You write sucj great poems like this! 5

I truly enjoyed reading this poem. The more I read it, the more by body began to have chills...up and down my spine. The imagery is fantastic!!! I would love to read more of your poems. So, please keep writing and keep up the great work. This is an amazing poem. :)

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