Comments : Dreaming

  • 10 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    I like this...its more sad than dark. I am looking at your conclusion...last line:

    Knowing happy endings,
    Only happen in (the book.)
    ^^^^^

    Istead of the book....howz about

    Only happen in (twisted fairytales)

    Nice small piece :)

    • 10 years ago

      by dhaxeeh

      Hi thanks, i will change it. Thank you for the suggestion:)