Ahhh this is where it gets more restricted and harder. The first part was great and this part is great too.

As always the first stanza is always full of emotion and great imagery. I can imagine the whole secne on my head as he waits for her. I do love the red hair and the smiles as they show so much of the characters personality and beauty. I love Romeo and Juliet feel to this. The princess is all he thinks about. And he has to hide his love which is why I love the feel. And the star of her dreams part is amazing. I can imagine the spot light on her in everything he does!

The part where they meet once a week is sad but its a great build up though because when they see each other it becomes more charished. And everytime they meet it would be more and mpre about love. Its hard when you have never been in love again when your emotions fight. Always feeling lost but always wanting to feel loved. I love the idea of this though as it goes back and fourth between the prince and princess

I love that you put them as two kingdoms. Where summer or winter can't cross sides. Just like in real life really. And its ok to feel again though. There is never anything wrong with smiling when you fall in love. When you are in love you always find a way to be together no matter what!!. I love the idea of this poem kiley its so fantastic. I can wait to hear the conclusion. Maybe have a twisted ending?? 5/5

Splendid write!

Very good!

This flows well !

I can imagine the wh0le seen clearly.. I think in part 3 they will face problems.. Good job

The first part of this poem remained steady in flow, as with the second part I feel that there was a line that brought a short halt to that. In your third stanza, you rhymed love, with tough. I feel that every other rhyme was paired well aside from this one. Although it brings a short pause, the feeling is not lost in your words.

I also enjoyed the broad spectrum in which you convey the details, leaving more to be interpreted by the reader. An example of this is your first stanza in it's entirety. With "the woods", "the meadow of flowers", and "used her power" brings key visuals to the readers' mind.

I also like that (as a person who watched "Secret of The Wings") you can speculate as to where the inspiration may have come from to explain this tragically beautiful romance.

Great writing :) Enjoyed both parts. 5/5