Aww Saff this is so sad...and I expected something darker with those prompts so I was surprised, but pleasantly all the same. You touched me, as if I felt this was personal to you.

I love the way you opened with the scene and then told the story and ending with a lesson to be learnt.
Very good work girl..

Hats off to you x

This one holds such power to it. Wow.

I love the portrayal here of the memory. It is delicate like a fragile flower. The soul always remembers its first kiss no matter what. I agree that it always remains in your heart and its always a feeling of bliss inside of you. This boy swept you off your feet and its a great feeling when you are floating on cloud nine. When you feel in love there is nothing else that seems to matter.I love this first stanza because of that. The last line means you were In your oen little world.

I love the analogy to a bee sting. Horror can truly bite at any time as can misery. You image sadness so well in your poems and I love how you went from happy to sad just like that. Its truly how quickly it can turn. Even in spirit it proves that he still loves you and everywhereyou turn it feels like he id there. No matter though this pperson will have your heart.

I love the hope in the end because you can feel the love there still. Yes death as stolen him away from you but as you said he's always there watching over you. There is nothing better than this feeling of closeness inside. I love you vague way of writing. It really haunts the readers mind. Again I love the multi elements brought to life here. Love and dark and sadness all written so well by your mind. I hope you keep writing. 5/5