Comments : Washed Out World

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    The world is a place of many different stories, and we often misread and forget that others are hurting, missing, in dark places, searching for happiness, following dreams. But the world can be a better place if we take the time to actually observe more and learn.

    I love the power in this, even thought the wording is simple.

    xxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This world is a very sad place and it's very hard to trust anyone in life. I loved the strong message you wrote iin this poem here. Your wording is very strong and rings trye to anyone's life. I agree with Tara here. There is good in the world but it is very hard to see and sometimes it is better to be alone for there is no one but us. Very well written!

  • 10 years ago

    by don

    Simply lovely, nice flow to this,

    don

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    You had a great flow from beginning to end nicely done 5\5