Comments : One Touch.

  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love this piece. As simple as it is, it tells a story (or at least eludes to one) and there is beautiful description given the randomized interesting prompts you have. I love the voice here, it is gentle and soft, yet the piece is so much more than that.

    Fantastic write. going on my favorites list.

  • 6 years ago

    by Amreen

    I agree... this brings out such vivid imagery with the progress of sentences. I love the prompts... inspiring and well done with the challenge!

    Very profound piece despite the length!

    Wonderfully penned and you lived up completely to the challenge!

    Keep writing:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Chelsey

    AHAH! Wth!!?? Leave it to Maryanne to NAIL this...I have to nominate this simply for the challenge that was in this piece. How tough it must have been, yet how flawless and effortless you made this seem..

    Love that there truley is a message in it!!...seconds do change everything, even the beauty in some things...we all age, we all change, nature, humans, food, etc...

    oh I love it.

  • 6 years ago

    by Britt

    This is such a fun prompt, I really love the challenge you were given! Very creative and you kicked butt on this... AH I like I like!