Comments : Monster

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was sad but also hopeful. So many times we are in a dark place and need to find a sanctuary, sometimes it is with someone special, and when we have a person like that, it makes this so much easier to deal with

    I loved the use of the prompts, and the imagery was good and the wording simple but effective.

    Great work Lemon :) x

  • 10 years ago

    by don

    Excellant poem, beautifull words, loved it

    don

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Another good one here my friend 5\5 & two thumbs up p&l my friend :)