Comments : Dark world

  • 6 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Wonderful piece. I love the darkness.

    • 6 years ago

      by Rose

      Thank you wintersangel

  • 6 years ago

    by Angel

    Imagery is my favorite part of every poem and you execute it wonderfully here. i am absolutaly in love with this poem. it is so on my favs list

    • 6 years ago

      by Rose

      Thank you Angel.

    • 6 years ago

      by Rose

      Thank you Angel.

    • 6 years ago

      by Rose

      Thank you Angel.

    • 6 years ago

      by Rose

      Thank you Angel.

  • 6 years ago

    by Angel

    Imagery is my favorite part of every poem and you execute it wonderfully here. i am absolutaly in love with this poem. it is so on my favs list

  • 6 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Exellent paradoxes expressed here, though I would personally cut it short and only keep

    "My dark world
    where i see not with my eyes
    but with my pain

    my dark world
    where i smell not with my nose
    but with regret

    my dark world
    where i smile not with my lips
    but with tears running down my face "

    Beautiful poem 5/5

    Dean-x